小寶貝的作文 @ JACK的輕航機飛行世界

今天小寶貝寫了篇<那天我們去五月雪>的作文,

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小寶貝創作全文如下~~

The Day We Went to Snowing May

At the first semester we went to Snowing May, which is a mountain in Miao Li. We left in the morning and took a long time to climb it. In the whole day, we saw many plants and some insects.

We rest beside rocks and played the cradle. Then teacher Yvonne told me and some of my classmates to follow her to reach the top of the mountain before others. So we got to the top first. But the rest of the students came up too. We ate our lunch quickly at noon then went to play. We had a wonderful afternoon time in Snowing May.

PS. 至於為何叫五月雪山,是因為小寶貝一直認為他去苗栗爬的那座山是"五月雪山",在他小小心靈認為苗栗的山就叫五月雪ㄋ